Lost Dreams - Disillusioned - Weekly Words Emotions

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When term 3 began Miss D made a new weekly words for us. Its called 'Weekly Words Emotions.' Its like Disillusioned to a person is they lost there illusion and there dreams.


We have to write what we think the word mean, the dictionary definition and write a sentence of what the word means. We weren't suppose to post this in week one but now we have too.



Here is the new Weekly Words





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Showing NOT Telling

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In room 6 we have been doing showing not telling sentences for a while now. We did this so we can improve our writing if we are writing a story.



The techniques is don't tell the emotion or you are telling. If you want to show you need to make it like this. But my shock sentence has 'shock' because Miss D said I was struggling a lot so I get tell once. After that I got a hang of it so I could write story's showing the emotion.



Here is the sentence that is corrected by Miss D

Show                                                                                                                       Tell 

Bailey was happy.
Jeremy was shocked.

Bailey was smiling in excitement. He ran because he couldn’t walk because he was so excited, instead he ran.

Jeremy stood still in shock. His stomach rumbling like he hasn’t eaten in a while, and his mouth opened wide.

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