We wrote our easTTle and we only have a few minutes to write one. My one is about assassin in the water park. You'll know the story line after when you read it. Its a cool little story I made up in 15 minutes I think.
My assassination story is inspired my Assassination Classroom. Its about children's in 3rd grade trying to assassinate their teacher in the classroom or somewhere else. You can watch it because I don't want to tell spoilers with you knowing. The title matches the ending of the story as you can see after when you read it.
Here is my writing
Never Come Back Again
Things were rumbling in my head when my nightmare came true. It started with a windy summer day. I jumped into the water not thinking how short the pool is. The lucky thing was that I jumped into the deep end. I climbed the stairs slowly until I got up to the slide. I slid down the dark side.
“Teacher,” Somebody called out, “ Can we now jump inside the pool, we’ve been waiting for ever.”
“Okay make sure you don’t hurt yourself on this trip.”
The teacher looked like an old man wearing a wig. His skin looked waterlogged but at the same time he looked like he was from his 70ths. In my head I was worried about something but I don’t know what it was. For a second I thought the water was screaming but it was just some kids splashing. He wore something like a detective robe and a black shirt under. The hat he wore looked like a hat from the 19ths. The man looked like an assassin trying to gain trust to the children but looks like a good teacher. Bang! A bullet shot nearly hitting the me. Though came through my head thinking that they were going to assassinate me. I grabbed a kicking board shielding myself with it. “This is a bad idea. The bullet will go through without me noticing.” I whispered. The other bullet shot as the others ran for their lives. People were running, screaming, the water shouted like it was furious. I should have a lesson that the rate of this water park is one of the deadliest one but very cheap.
“Here's Johnny!” The assassin said with a knife. “Anyone want to play,”
The kids from the school trip ran behind their teacher wait for him to make a move. The teacher grabbed a stun gun and shot him. The teacher stands there waiting for the police to come taking off all of the assassin weapons. Everyone got refunds and the crime scene went on news. Lucky nobody just killed, the assassin missed all his shots. I said laughing. The sign that the police left was Never Come Back Again. After that I remembered about the teacher. He still might be an assassin. Then a p---tal o--p-n t-e e-=-d[][] T-o --e Con-in]\d!
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