Today I have been working on my vocabulary. We have to write something using our goals
Here is my goal
Vocabulary -Use the correct words to fit the genre I am using
Here my awesome writing.
Dreams falls
Chapter one ‘Fall Asleep’
“Ahh, looks like I need to drink some milk.”
I went to the kitchen and drank some milk. Then I was a little bit sleepy.
So I went to my room and It was clean and tidy like a shining star.
I walked to my bed and checked where is my basketball.
I went to check under my bed. When I looked I saw my lost phone.
I finally found it, I was surprised that my phone was under my bed the whole time.
I place my phone on my charging desk and charge it.
When I went to my bed I fell asleep. Then I woke up.
So I went to my room and It was clean and tidy like a shining star.
I walked to my bed and checked where is my basketball.
I went to check under my bed. When I looked I saw my lost phone.
I finally found it, I was surprised that my phone was under my bed the whole time.
I place my phone on my charging desk and charge it.
When I went to my bed I fell asleep. Then I woke up.
Chapter 2 Freddy Krueger Dream Nightmare!
I checked my house if anyone was inside. Then I checked my watch it said 11:00 pm.
I woke up 3 second when I slept. Then my tv turned on, then the movie played. Freddy Krueger!
I woke up 3 second when I slept. Then my tv turned on, then the movie played. Freddy Krueger!
“I think he is in my house! Please Krueger please. Don’t. Kill. Mee.
‘AHRR!’
“Ahh!”
Then I hesitate. Then ran to the kitchen. Then I saw the note I hang to get rid of him. He can't hit me if I
don't fear him. So l Laugh at him again and again. He was annoyed. So I keep laughing
"Stop it," Freddy screamed.
Then he disappeared. My dream was falling apart. Then I waked up in my room with my.
I look at my TV it was off.
don't fear him. So l Laugh at him again and again. He was annoyed. So I keep laughing
"Stop it," Freddy screamed.
Then he disappeared. My dream was falling apart. Then I waked up in my room with my.
I look at my TV it was off.
“Ahhh! Wait what?? Was that only a dream?”
I checked my watch. It was 1:16 am. It took me 1 hour and 6 minutes to wake up.
“Was it all a dream?”
The End?
Thank you for reading my scary story I made. What if you were in situation. What will you do?
Can I have some feedback how scary was it?
Can I have some feedback how scary was it?
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