Haunted house

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In room 6 we get to do some free writing. I wrote about a scary story of a free house. I'm still working on my vocabulary. I tried to put a lot of vocabulary in my story.

Here is my goal

Vocabulary -Use the correct words to fit the genre I am using

Here my scary story

I was playing games at 12 am, then I heard something outside. I went outside no one was there.

10 hour earlier

I look online, then I saw a free house. I wanted it so I pack my stuff. I check my phone if it was charged and ready to go. I didn’t have that much stuff.

When I arrive I saw a neighbour, he was welcoming me. He told me why I picked this house. I laugh. When I arrived I saw the owner She was a woman, she was old. She gave me a bag with pie. It said it was from Charlotte. I was going to say thank you but she left.I set up all of my things, and my wifi. The wifi only cost 10c. The was weird but it was powerful. I ate the pie that Charlottle gave me. It was yummy. I ate all of it then got full. When it was 3pm I went to take a bath. The door was opening, I told who ever was in my house to ‘GET OUT!’ But no one speak, I hesite. When I finished my bath I went up stairs. Then sleep.

9 hour later

I woke, I check my watch. It was 12AM! I thought I was playing games. Maybe I was dreaming.

“Hel’”

Then I heard a noise outside. I walked outside but no one was there I hesitate. Then I woke up again. I was sleepy so I went back to sleep. When I slept I saw a creepy dream. When I was sleeping I heard a noise from the attic. I walked up stairs to the attic then saw Charlotte. Her skin was green as a zombie holding the pie she gave me I hesitate. I shivers down the stair and I fell! Then I woke up. I heard the same noise in my dream. But I refuse to go up stairs. I stayed in my bed for hours without sleeping. Then when it was day I ran to the neighbour who welcome me. I told him where is Charlotte? He looked at me. He said.

“There is no Charlottle here. She died in the house you are living in. But she is famous for her pie.”

I hesitate. Then ran to my house. I was ready to pack everything. I packed everything in 4 minutes and drive to the library. I used my laptop and find a different house. I saw a house for 400 hundred dollar. I brought it and rent a one day hotel.

The next day I woke up and went to my new house. It looked awesome in the outside. But the inside was empty. The toilet, the heat pump and the oven was there. I was waiting for my heavy stuff to arrive so I played on my I pad. My I pad have a lot of game, and a lot of offline games. I played for 15 minutes, then my stuff arrived. I went outside, then I told everyone on the truck to help me move my stuff. I help a man name Mason. He was bring my bed to me room. While the others put my stuff where I told them. When we were done I watched some TV. I went to YouTube and watch some funny videos. I really want to get rid of my fear of the free haunted house.

The End?

Was it scary? What if you were in this situation buying a house. Can I have feed back?