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Room 6 have been doing different language features like onomatopoeia. We are currently doing some personification writing like, The door waited for me and slammed my hand in raged. The next language features we are doing is hyperbole if I remember correctly.
Personification is like a object that acts like a human like robots. Like, The violent door dashed its way to slammed my hands. The personification in the sentence was dashed its way to slammed my hand like it chooses to do it.
Here is my awesome writing
The storm that was in Antarctica felt angrier making the wind move faster and strong enough to blow a microwave. The snow felt lonely as it slowly fell moving because of the strong wind. The powerful and violent avalanche dashed its way to the trees paralyzed and slammed it making it fragile and powerless. A long time ago some tall and brave people dreams once got their dreams stolen by the mountain and their dreams couldn’t be saved. Now the mountain gave up and let the next group climbed peacefully.
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Friday, 6 September 2019
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hi Aaron its Samuel. i like how you use lost of emotions in your writing you can change the colder of the litters.goodbye
ReplyDeleteKamusta Samuel, Thank you for the comment. I used lots of emotions because its more dramatic. Sorry if the green texts is bothering you its because I changed it when I have time to change things in my blog.
DeleteSincerely Aaron