I just want to say sorry because I haven't been posting on my blog in a little while. Its because I was busy doing stuff in the holidays. But I posted one weekly words so I'm going to post something about my holidays. And I also missed a weekly words blog post last week so sorry again.
Today Miss D today at writing made us do 100 words challenge. My story is Exactly 100 words again I checked this time. We were wring about being in the rain and a grey car approached us. We need to add strong words, vocabulary, adjective, hyperbole and onomatopoeia. And by the way the title and the to be continued does not count as words.
Here is my story
100 Word Challenge
Week 1
“I shouldn’t have come here. Now I’m lost!”
Beeeeeeb! As a grey car approached out of nowhere. I barely recognise it as it pulled up.
“Hop in,” The Man said.
The car had one wheel exposed to the rain rusting it. The other wheels look very old.
The car window was pitch black so I couldn’t see inside the car.
I felt disillusioned what waited for me. The dirty seat that was never been cleaned before.
The car window was pitch black so I couldn’t see inside the car.
I felt disillusioned what waited for me. The dirty seat that was never been cleaned before.
“I’m sitting on that thing!”
“Your choice get yourself even more lost in this country and die of sickness, or come in.”
“Umm Uhhh,”
To Be Continued
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