Miss D taught us how to change a telling sentence to describing. We have to use the five senses. For example this is the five senses sight, touch, emotion, hearing and taste. We also learnt how to make a great descriptive narrative. We have to highlight the key words that we want to describe more. I only highlighted three because that's my key words.
Here is my descriptive Narrative with my sticky note
Sticky note one
Wake up from my dream played
The dream was a nightmare! It was like getting beat up but I just got arrested. But it was really in real life.
Well it was not a great nightmare but it was for me. I complied to the cops saying tell me insurance but they didn’t
listen.
Well it was not a great nightmare but it was for me. I complied to the cops saying tell me insurance but they didn’t
listen.
Then I woke up.
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